Julia
Major Argument: Know about all sides of astrology/horoscopes, even the fallacies.
Strength: Using a website is a good medium choice. The layout, colors, and theme all fit with the topic. Very informational
Develop: Text seems pretty blocky, maybe break it up with subheadings or pictures to make it more visually appealing and welcoming.
Meredith
Major Argument: Photo manipulation/editing happens a lot, and what you see isn't always what's real.
Strength: Relative to today's current media. Good comparison of the before and after.
Develop: Some parts have really straight edges, also have the text added to state your argument and it will be good.
Kim
Kim
Major Argument: UP Unique Creations is neat/artsy/fun.
Strength: Web page is medium choice, good theme/color scheme/layout.
Develop: Seemed fine...
Caitlyn/Caitlin/Kaitlyn/Katelynn
Caitlyn/Caitlin/Kaitlyn/Katelynn
Major Argument: There's more to their public appearance than what you may think
Strength: Nice layout, I like the way it compares the two side-by-side.
Develop: More color instead of just black and white.
Courtney
Major Argument: Nanowrimo exists. Participate in writing a novel in November.
Strength: Visually grasping. Informative.
Develop: Maybe space out the text more (space between each line).
Devin
Major Argument: University meal plan may not be the best option for student dining.
Strength: Relevant. Use of photos helps viewer know what you're talking about. Addition of the survey is a great touch.
Develop: Seems weird to be on a blog.
Hannah/Girl with pony tail
Major Argument: Keep up with what [she] is up to and be inspired by [her].
Strength: Good choice of layout/font/colors. Makes it feel very comfortable.
Develop: More posts/stronger argument.
Jane/Blonde girl that's not Julia or I
Major Argument: Use your skills wisely.
Strength: A movie is a great way to portray these ideas. Relatable.
Develop: Have more time to read text. More pictures in-between the text only parts.
Jana (not Jenna)
Major Argument: Use Halonen Landscaping services.
Strength: Visually appealing. Neat text and pictures.
Develop: The small text about something premiere is kind of blurry with the shadow behind it. Maybe take shadow away.
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