Tuesday, November 13, 2012

Productions that were kind of finished



Julia

Major Argument: Know about all sides of astrology/horoscopes, even the fallacies.

Strength: Using a website is a good medium choice. The layout, colors, and theme all fit with the topic. Very informational

Develop: Text seems pretty blocky, maybe break it up with subheadings or pictures to make it more visually appealing and welcoming.



Meredith

Major Argument: Photo manipulation/editing happens a lot, and what you see isn't always what's real.

Strength: Relative to today's current media. Good comparison of the before and after.

Develop: Some parts have really straight edges, also have the text added to state your argument and it will be good.



Kim

Major Argument: UP Unique Creations is neat/artsy/fun.

Strength: Web page is medium choice, good theme/color scheme/layout.

Develop: Seemed fine...



Caitlyn/Caitlin/Kaitlyn/Katelynn

Major Argument: There's more to their public appearance than what you may think

Strength: Nice layout, I like the way it compares the two side-by-side.

Develop: More color instead of just black and white.



Courtney

Major Argument: Nanowrimo exists. Participate in writing a novel in November.

Strength: Visually grasping. Informative.

Develop: Maybe space out the text more (space between each line).



Devin

Major Argument: University meal plan may not be the best option for student dining.

Strength: Relevant. Use of photos helps viewer know what you're talking about. Addition of the survey is a great touch.

Develop: Seems weird to be on a blog.



Hannah/Girl with pony tail

Major Argument: Keep up with what [she] is up to and be inspired by [her].

Strength: Good choice of layout/font/colors. Makes it feel very comfortable.

Develop: More posts/stronger argument.



Jane/Blonde girl that's not Julia or I

Major Argument: Use your skills wisely.

Strength: A movie is a great way to portray these ideas. Relatable.

Develop: Have more time to read text. More pictures in-between the text only parts.



Jana (not Jenna)

Major Argument: Use Halonen Landscaping services.

Strength: Visually appealing. Neat text and pictures.

Develop: The small text about something premiere is kind of blurry with the shadow behind it. Maybe take shadow away.

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